Rather, your independent analysis of the frames, sourcing and professional techniques should be highlighted. It should be your analytical and personal text, not the recycling of the content of the movie.
Feel free to share your independent thoughts, arguments, even critical remarks. Also, feel free to use first person, and express feelings in these essays. As we discussed earlier, the journals have three goals:
a) introduce key environmental problems and challenges of the 21st century;
b) offer an overview of some of the best, most important, and most infliential, documentaries and television programs in the field (hopefully, they are also among the most enjoyable);
c) offer a training ground for refining your personal essay style, your voice and genre.
The third goal would be best used by developing your independent, analytical insights and critical points.
A specific question should always be explored: does the movie offer solutions to the problem? If yes, what kind of individual or collective solutions are these? How detailed are the solutions and how much emphasis is put on/time is given to them in the movie? What is the proportion of introducing the problems vs. offering solutions? Are those two presented as being separate, or interconnected, intervowen in some way? What is your opinion about the presentation of solutions? Are they effectively presented?
A technical note. Please always include your name at the top of the journal. Also, please name your word file in this way FAMILYNAME3 for movie journal 3, FAMILYNAME4 for movie journal 4, etc. (for easier documentation). In the Subject of the email, plase write Moviejournal 4 TITLE OF MOVIE. If possible, please also use an email address that can be identified with your name (preferebly, family and first name).
I hope you enjoy the films, the guest speakers and the exercises.Thank you for the good work–please keep it up.
Best, Miklos